Feasibility Analysis correction

i have a Feasibility Analysis paper ready but need some fixing and here are the correction feedback : (The Executive summary doesn’t tell me anything, not sure why it’s there. You state that customers will save money since you are using PayPal, etc. How so? In the section on why your service is unique, you mention rifle competitors. What is that? Your start up costs are not accurate. I don’t see how you can purchase all equipment, including a pick up truck for $5,000.) try to change and fix the paper according to the feedback.

here is the paper

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